Noticed while Re-reading

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  • #299
    BionicRich
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    Things i noticed while doing my first re-read.

    – i completely forgot about Tanya’s dad. smoosh.
    – for-shadowing that whole bear thing a lot.

    #370
    Loupy
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    Mr. Conroe, one thing I’ve noticed in multiple rereads of the DA series, is you REALLY like the phrase “apex predator”….a lot. Don’t get me wrong, it’s a great phrase, very evocative, but as old literature & public speaking teachers have drummed into me, overuse of words or phrases can devalue their impact & detract from the story. Sorry to nit pick.

    #371
    Thomas
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    While re-reading through the Demon Accords Compendium II I noticed that in Tanya’s PoV there is a part where everyone states they have never been to Disney except Arkady (which I thought was hilarious). In this dialogue Tanya “Let It Go” was this an intentional nod to Frozen, a happy coincident or am I just seeing things? either way I got a chuckle out of it.

    #372
    John Conroe
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    Thomas,

    As clever as that would have been, it was just an accident.

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